A fan work - the August Agency

Oh wow. 4k words. No wonder this was taking so long to write!

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Chapter 32: Unexpected Fortune

Frank Poe

Month 12, Day 12, 8:00 PM

Frank waited at the a corner paved in mud-covered cobbles just outside the Night Market for Canelo to arrive. The grimy Mires flooded regularly, and winter only gave a mild reprieve from the worst of the smell. Frank’s eyes watered while trying acclimate to the acrid smell coming from the gutter. In retrospect, he wished that he’d agreed to meet Canelo on a different corner, one closer to the upper part of the city. He’d committed, however, so, he wasn’t going to renege due to discomfort.

Attending the meeting meant anonymity. Anonymity meant that Frank disguised himself with the practical method of wearing a dark grey, almost black suit, hooded matching grey cloak to cover his hair, leather boots with iron hobnailed soles, and a magical mask to cover his face completely. In other words, clothes that Marie finally approved of. The only color was Frank’s mask.

Lord Stag seemingly preferred an entirely featureless mask with eyeholes, but Poe preferred a mask that would hide his eyes and have some illusory features.

His mask stayed stuck to his face with a subtle magic, and no ties. It had eyeholes that allowed him to see out, but, a thin black fabric stretched over the entire stiff face-covering mask. From the wearer’s perspective, the mask obscured nothing; but, from those that gazed upon it, the fabric hid Frank’s eyes, including their unusual color.

Further confusing the observer, across the surface of his mask, an enchanted illusion showed a pair of deepwater shark’s slitted eyes with ochre sclera, green iris, and dark blue pupils. The illusory eyes rested farther apart than a human’s eyes, giving the mask—and therefore its wearer—an even more uncanny and slightly cock-eyed look.

Frank could deactivate the illusion, or select other images, to make it even more difficult to track the mask to his person. He’d had a crafter make the mask, but he had custom crafted the illusion enchantments.

Poe had carefully chosen all his clothing to be worn only to and from the meetings so only someone following him would know his purpose. In fact, he’d had to exit the August Agency via a rear window to avoid the watchers that either the Stags or the Morrows had placed outside the front entrance. He’d dodged them easily, but he also made sure to double back and check for anyone that might be following him. He was free of prying eyes.

Still, he couldn’t bring his koi coat, or his recognizable pipe, and therefore he did not have access to its built-in spell arrays, so he brought what other protection he was willing to use.

Frank wore a cloak with custom protective enchantments, and he carried his fighting cane. The cane’s maker fashioned the small staff a knuckle in diameter, half his height, and capped both ends in forged and machined iron. The straight-grained, rived, and drawknife carved stick of enchanted mime oak could take sword strike without denting, bending, warping, or breaking. Frank could use the heavy iron ends to break ribs, knock heads, or use the whole stick like a lever to trip or throw an attacker. He could use most of his pipe fighting techniques, and a few specialties of stick fighting as well.

Patrolling night market enforcers gave him some suspicious looks, but even they knew that coppers did not hide their faces. The seemingly unobtrusive enforcers were there to tip off businesses should there be a surprise.

There were plenty of raids on Night Market businesses. The street vendors often had plenty of opportunities to flee if a raid came, but the vendors with physical shops had magical and mundane means to hide the illegal portions of their operations.

While Frank waited, he saw an illegal potion dealer shake hands with dozens of strangers to pass along money and potions. Unless one knew better, you’d think he was just a popular man meeting friends in the street. Except the “friends” left, and the dealer stayed.

Frank grit his teeth under the mask. He hated the potion trade.

So, of course, people approached Frank to buy from his nonexistent stock.

Some of them were masked, so they could have been Canelo in disguise. Except, Poe provided her with a passphrase in advance, and those that hid their faces failed to give it.

Accordingly, he waved all these away. They may have thought he was a competitor, but that would have been the height of stupidity. The corner dealer had a red belt and wore red gloves. No one would doubt that he worked for the Morrows. Red gloves watched each of Frank’s interactions with barely disguised suspicion. The dealer didn’t approach, however, likely because Frank did not engage with any of the addicts that mistakenly tried to buy from Frank.

Frank and red gloves warily watched each other, until a masked woman, approached him around the bend in the narrow street.

“Are you … Po … Fate hides the face of friend and foe alike?”

“Only to those with eyes that can not see the thread.” Poe nodded toward Canelo, who had managed to get password correct. He examined whether she’d improved her clandestine work. She wore dark nondescript clothing and a mask, but she still had a few recognizable features, like her boots. It would do.

“Follow me.” Frank left red gloves behind and lead Canelo to an old warehouse building. He stopped them away from the light, drawing for a close conference in a shadow across the street.

“You brought restricted components to trade, as I suggested?”

“Yes.”

“My payment?” Frank asked. Canelo handed over a bag. Frank opened it and checked the pair of boxes both by looking at the contents and by smelling them. She’d brought the bark from the Fey Alder, Crimson Dogwood, and Silver Orb Weaver bush. No one harvested the Silver Orb Weaver bush’s bark, so he was abusing Canelo’s access to the University’s menagerie to finally get his hands on it. He found that these three in combination worked very well in smoke shaping magics.

“Very good.” Frank nodded and put away the bag on his belt under the cloak. “Let’s get a few reminders out of the way. It was all in my letter, in nice clear numbered list, but if you focus your will and pay attention you might actually remember this conversation. First, I’m introducing you to this meeting. This is your first time, so keep your mouth shut, except for offering those rare components. It’s important that you actually sell them. If you aren’t bringing value to the meeting, you won’t get any of your questions answered. I’ll tell you right now, do not ask about the Raven Queen in this meeting.”

“But that’s why I’m here!” Canelo whispered urgently.

“The Coppers desperately want the Raven Queen. You do not want to be seen as a Copper, understand? Be patient. For this meeting, you need to appear just as crooked as the rest of us, right?”

“Fine.”

“Second, do not ask stupid questions. Let’s review; what’s a stupid question?”

“Asking personal questions? …”

“Close. Do not ask for names or affiliations. Do not ask me any questions, because I will ignore you. Do not ask for any personal details from the guards or the interviewers.” Frank grimaced behind the Mask, and continued with his list.

“Third, you will be interviewed. Answer truthfully. If you lie they will ban you from the meeting. And fourth, Do Not embarrass me. I’ll be sponsoring you, so let’s be clear about this: I am not working for the Coppers, or the Crowns. I’ve my own business at this meeting as well, and I expect you to keep your nose out of it.”

“I can keep quiet.”

“They only allow the use of monikers - no names. You can give one, or not. I go by the Mariner, but only a few have moniker’s at all. I strongly suggest you skip it. They tolerate no violence, and by Myrdin, if you fuck that up, I’ll hide your dead body from the Coppers, the Morrows, and the University myself … if there’s anything left of it. I am not your bodyguard. Clear?”

Canelo swallowed hard. Frank couldn’t see her face under the mask, but he hoped she had her serious face on.

“As my letter said, there’s three parts to the meeting: offers to sell, offers to buy, and then completing the contracts. People gossip before and after, which may or may not be helpful to you. I assume you know how not to be an idiot?”

Finally, Canelo seemed to get some fire, and she balled her hands into fists.

“Listen here, I’m …”

“Going into a situation where you have little experience and thinking you know all the dangers. I assure you: you do not. Now, focus your will on remembering what I just told you. You should have already read it once, except my moniker. I’m not writing it down, and you’ll have to overcome my curse on your own. If you forget my moniker I’m not reminding you. Remember to look at this card if you find yourself confused.” Poe handed Canelo a card.

“It just says, ‘1. Listen carefully. 2. Think carefully. 3. Tell the truth. 4. Give no personal information. 5. Ask no personal questions. 6. Don’t be a stupid fool.’?”

“That’s right. Do that and you’ll be able to come back next time. If I have to, I’ll explain how to find the next meeting if you need me to, but I expect the interviewers will do that.”

Canelo sighed like the barely qualified young adult that she was. Frank ignored her and lead her to the doorway to the warehouse for the meeting. He shared the passphrase, and the guards allowed them in. A few of the members remembered his attendance from meeting to meeting, so he could introduce Canelo as a perspective member and hand her off to be interrogated. She was carefully studying the card as she walked away.

Frank stifled his own sigh. She must have had copious amounts of will, but she failed to have the kind of clarity Marie managed effortlessly. Marie would need training in regulating her will, but Frank still marveled at her outstanding talent. In contrast, Canelo had some talent, and clear ambition, but Frank wondered how she managed to get in this situation with her sponsors at the University.

Frank couldn’t rescue her from her recklessness, even if he wanted to.

While Frank waited for the meeting to begin, other thaumaturges wandered into the meeting space.

Then, the woman arrived. Liza. Everyone knew who she was. Even masked, she was too flashy to be anyone else. She sat and immediately expanded her portable desk, reminding Frank of Lord Stag’s own intimidating power play. She had no authority at the meeting, but she oozed general magical power and ability. In particular, Frank witnessed her deliver on both powerful enchanting and divination at the meetings.

Frank considered himself a qualified, if not a Master-level divination practitioner. But, in his early days away from Haven, he’d lost several divination warding contracts to Liza at these meetings. At first he felt offended, but then he learned the hard truth. She cast better and more sophisticated wards, crafted durable and long lasting enchantments, and she displayed skill far in advance of what an ordinary black market sorcerer could provide. Even though she commanded steep fees, everyone paid without complaint.

Frank knew she warded up her home in the Mires with the sort of magic that made her unassailable. Rumors suggested that she’d even work blood magic for the right price. Frank reckoned she had military-level experience in divination curses.

Frank quashed any jealousy he might have had, and reminded himself of point 6. on his card. ‘Don’t be an idiot.’ Frank thought.

If he had a thousand gold, and she had the inclination, he reckoned Liza could have found the Raven Queen for him, even using the trinkets from Ennis Naught. A bit of blood like the coppers had, and Liza could have tracked the Raven Queen into the mythical plane of darkness if she desired.

His pride and his pocketbook, however, kept him from recruiting Liza in the search for the Raven Queen. He wondered if Liza would take whatever bait Canelo would offer at the next meeting.

Eventually, the interrogation team brought Canelo into the meeting. They were still early, so it took a little time for the meeting to get started.

“Mariner.” A large, somewhat flabby, sorcerer approached him. “Any news to share?”

“No.”

“Shame.”

“I tell you the same thing every meeting.”

“Do you? I don’t recall.”

Frank snorted. The dealer in exotic ingredients was not a weak willed thaumaturge. He never forgot Frank’s moniker, and he never mistook Frank for anyone else. A few others in this crowd that managed to overcome Frank’s curse as well; Liza never spoke to Frank before or after the meeting, but she would use his moniker from time to time during it.

Besides those two, there was one other: an older diviner. She had spoken to Frank on several occasions, and she never forgot a word. If Liza was a tiny queen, this woman was everyone’s kindly old grandmother. ‘And, if I really believe that,’ Frank thought ‘I should find someone to sell me a nice palace on the Wall. Kindly grandmothers don’t attend these meetings.’

Frank noted that the meeting was unusually crowded. Perhaps something valuable had come in, and there were rumors about it. Frank wouldn’t have heard them, even if he wasn’t so busy. Frank wasn’t one thing or another: not a Master who could set up on his own as a thaumaturge, nor a true black market spell caster inside the circle of illegal casters.

This would be his first opportunity to hear magic rumor for some time, but rumors of Millie Parker dominated the conversations. Frank listened.

“Did you hear? Rumor is that Millie went abberrant.”

“I’m surprised. She was a nice girl, aside from being a whore, of course.”

“Don’t you dare judge.” One of the witches growled. “There but for grace go us all. We”re living on the bleeding edge everyday. The Morrows did it for her, what with them turning a blind eye and discouraging honest healers in their territory.”

“I don’t mean no offense to the profession. But, it weren’t the Morrows that cast the spell, was it?”

“She’s a warning to us all.” Another said.

“As if we don’t know well enough. If you turn to untested blood magic when you’re desperate, then you’re just asking for trouble.”

“Blood magic?” Someone scoffed. “What was the effect, some type of lust inducing magic? That’s a far cry from an aberrant made with real blood magic. She made glamours, and not even powerful ones. The Red Guard got it under control pretty quick.”

“A little bedroom magic doesn’t make aberrants.” Another woman said. “She was messing with something beyond her ken, that’s for sure.”

An argument broke out over the spell that Millie had cast. Whether it was one that had been traded before at the meeting, and whose fault it was that Millie had broken.

The conversation continued, making Frank increasingly uncomfortable. Frank considered that there was no point in adding voice to this conversation. He felt sick just thinking about those hours that he’d been under her compulsion. The meeting organizers eventually shut this argument down. Spells shared at the meeting weren’t guaranteed; the buyer took the responsibility casting and reviewing spell array.

Eventually, the meeting began.

The meeting began with offers. A particularly heavily covered, and veiled participant started.

“Music pipes; play them and one becomes supernaturally attractive to the listener, or listeners. Useful in seduction.” The androgynous voice of the offer said.

Frank shivered. He’d have enough of magical attraction for lifetime.

“I note there’s no promise of success here.” Frank said flatly.

“Attraction is just enough to get the attention, the rest you’ll need handle on your own.”

Frank wasn’t interested. And, neither were the other members, with only one bidder, and the robed person rejected it. Perhaps meeting participants still had Millie Parker in mind.

Next, a person offered a Celestial Lycogala, a living sample; restricted because of its flexibility in elemental transmutation and its rarity from over-harvesting, but not impossible to obtain. There was a brief bidding war, but eventually the exotic parts dealer bought it in exchange for a plant part from the plane of air.

Then Canelo. On Frank’s advice, she’d obtained one of the more desirable restricted ingredients.

“Fairy Wings. Harvested within the last two days, and kept in a stasis box. I’m interested in artifacts, information, or interesting magic.”

Frank didn’t want to know how Canelo managed to smuggle those out of the University, but they were well known contraband when he attended.

The diviners and shamans in the room all sat a little straighter. This was the sort of component that let them see into the beyond. Or, at least, conventional theory had shamans use hallucinogenics to separate the mind from the body and grant sight beyond sight.

Not everyone had an interest. Liza just stuck and elbow on her table and rested her chin on her hand. She needed no hallucinogenic crutch for her magic.

“I can offer potions. High grade anti-aging or healing with ingredients from the plane of radiance. Or, if you specify, I can offer a variety of useful potions.” The ingredients dealer offered.

“I’m willing to provide protection artifacts, useful against hostile spirits.” Another offer came.

“I have copies of an unexpurgated Geller’s Compendium of Sympathetic Ingredients. I’m willing to allow you to peruse the volume and make notes. If you prefer, I am willing to part with an unexpurgated history of the Blood Empire, which includes descriptions of their experiments.” Another offered. Frank suspected that one was actually a shaman. In the past, they’d bartered for hallucinogenic items, and they had offered to treat curses using shamanistic magic before.

Canelo seemed unimpressed with the books. Frank reckoned that with access to the library, she had no real understanding of how valuable information could be to this group.

“What sort of artifacts?” Grandmother asked. “I have a prewar battle wand, capable of holding a dozen charges. It’s untraceable. A useful item in these dangerous times.” Frank was a bit surprised that grandmother would offer anything like that. She’d never offered anything like that before.

“Anyone else?” The leader of the meeting asked.

Canelo paused for a moment, perhaps unsure of what she wanted to say. “I am interested in the battle wand.”

Frank frowned under his mask. It’s not the choice he would have picked.

Frank didn’t like battle wands. They could be stolen, or ran out of charges, and they had no grace or art. Magic should be beautiful, not just useful.

Frank had no use for pacifism. He’d studied several of the sailor’s fighting techniques with capable instructors. Learning a marital art taught more than fighting; the martial artist discovered limits, their physical body, reading others, preparation, tenacity, and loss. A wand didn’t teach anything, except how to point, hurt others, and, if you were very unlucky, how to kill.

“I am offering a Shen Dragon Pearl.”

Frank took a deep measured breath. A deep water pearl from the Charybdis Gulf. A dangerous, and valuable, acquisition from the Shen clam. Diving itself was something only the desperate would do. The clam was a magical creature, and even extracting a pearl required complex magic, or a practical impossibility: killing the clam. Frank knew that the secret to harvesting these pearls should have died out long ago.

“Is it rated?” Someone asked. The University taught that cerelium made the best conduit, followed by natural gemstones. But, as with most things, reality was complex. Some magic components also made for powerful, if not quite as reliable conduits.

“At least one thousand thaums. For that reason alone it would be worth a substantial amount, but this pearl is also useful as a spell component. During the Blood empire, these pearls were used to lengthen life, manipulate time, and preserve memory.”

Franks emotions leaped, and it was difficult for him to even contemplate. Preserve memory. The doctors at Haven had tried with a potion. Giving everyone he met an expensive memory potion was not feasible. But, this? This could be just the sort of magic he needed. He needed a powerful artifact, not a mere potion.

His mind raced to what he could offer. He had money enough, but could he win this auction? This could be something for himself, a chance to be normal.

Then bidding began. Wealth at this meeting here wasn’t in gold, although the Pearl seller received plenty of monetary offers. Some offered less valuable spell ingredients but in greater quantity, while some offered a combination of gold and beast cores.

But true wealth at the meeting resided in skill and knowledge.

A potion maker offered to provide a variety of potions, both rare and expensive, legal and illegal.

Liza made an offer of one of her portable offices, assistance with a divination, and a custom warded chest to be delivered within a year.

Then Frank spoke.

“A complete copy of the five volume set of the Handbook of Components, Physical Laws, Spell Arrays, and Glyphs of the Modern Sorcerer by Grandmaster Aquina Erasmus. I am offering a black-market imported second edition, not the later four volume third edition published here in the city and edited to remove the spells on mind magic, defenses to compulsion magic, and her speculation on modern shamanry and esoteric magic. While the recent edition is restricted, the version I am offering was banned. The glyph reference from the third edition alone has been traded here at this meeting for over a hundred gold.”

What Frank didn’t say was that he had two copies.

One copy was a censor’s stamped copy that he saved from destruction through his contact with the publisher, and the second was an imported pre-ban copy that would look legal at a cursory glance. Either way, what he was offering was, in book form, the first four classes in the Universities’ Modern Magics course, and enough reference material to reach the level of a Master in fact, if not in name.

He heard a gasp, and even Liza turned her head toward him.

“A bird in hand is better than two in the bush.” The Pearl Seller said. “I appreciate many of these offers, but this is the first I know will be delivered soon and with certainty. Is there any counter offer?”

Liza seemed to consider it. “I may be able to make a further counteroffer, but I’d need time to consider it.”

“Do you have them with you?” The seller asked Frank.

“No, but I’ll bring them next meeting, I will take a blood vow to that effect if you are willing to deliver the Pearl at this meeting.”

“Hmm. Bring the books to the meeting after next, I want to bring someone knowledgable on their contents to check them. I’ll also consider the other one’s counteroffer at that time, you may inspect the pearl tonight, but not keep it. I’ll agree that I will have the Pearl ready at that meeting for exchange.”

Frank stifled his jumpy nerves. He wanted this pearl.

“This is acceptable.” Frank tried to sound nonchalant.

But inside, he shivered inside with anticipation. This could be it; the way he could overcome the curse; everyone he met could remember him again.

No more notes. Maybe he could create a zone around him where people’s memories would hold true. He might make the pearl into an artifact, or have a static spell array? A concrete solution might be in his grasp.

When the meeting moved to the requests stage, Frank’s mind still ran possibilities. Could he make a bargain with Liza? Perhaps they could find a way to use the pearl for both of their benefit. She was the only sorcerer he knew who would have the necessary specializations. Who else could he consult? Owning a Shen Dragon Pearl was illegal. Could he even consult someone at the University?

He almost forgot the other reason why he’s come to the meeting. The leader was asking if there were any last requests before moving on when Frank finally remembered.

“I have been asked to broker an agreement between … a local interest and a skillful glamourist. As far as I know, the glamourist can remain anonymous.”

“What’s the compensation?” One curious attendee asked.

“It’s not my call. I would put the glamourist in contact with a private detective who will work with the both sides to set up a meeting.”

“A local interest. This wouldn’t be a replacement of Millie Parker’s old deal with the Morrows, would it?”

“It is.”

The room seemed to grow a little colder. No one spoke for a moment.

“Not on your life.” Someone muttered.

“Is there no interest in this request?” The meeting leader eventually asked. When no one responded, the leader ended that part of the meeting and they began the individual meetings. Frank eventually met with the entirely veilled seller.

They gathered in one of the rooms. The figure brought out a coarse wooden box the size of a fist and opened it, by lifting away a close fitting lid. The interior had been lined with bleached wool to protect the pearl, so the seller shifted it aside.

Frank knew what to expect. Dragon pearls achieved a robust reputation among mind healers. When researching a cure to his curse on his own, Frank found at least three treatises, and several monographs alluded to them.

To the uneducated eye, one might have thought it was cheap fake; an iridescent orange and yellow, and pale white and night black spots mottled over its smooth perfectly spherical surface.

“May I?” Frank asked, reaching toward the pearl.

The seller nodded.

Frank shifted the fluffy wool lifted it from the box. The pearl weighted less than he expected, and was roughly the size of sea turtle egg.

He carefully lifted it to his mouth, and gingerly rubbed it against a tooth. It had a lightly rough feeling. It was, of course, possible that the pearl was mage created, but the pearl felt as genuine as he could detect without attempting to cast using it as a conduit.

Frank wish he had a stronger light spell, to examine its irregularities; natural irregularity followed a different pattern than thaumaturge-created work. He’d need to bring the components for that sort of array at the next meeting.

“I will check it again at the exchange.” Frank said. The seller agreed, and Frank put the agreement it writing, witnessed by the meeting’s agent.

When he left the room, the meeting had already seen many people leave. Canelo remained, but she left before he did.

When Frank stepped out into the cool darkness, he tapped his stick lightly on the road home. He’d have to sneak back into his own offices, but her remained cheerful; he had a pocket full of materials for his kinninnick and the potential for a genuine solution to his curse.

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So, yeah. Sorry for the slow writing. That meeting probably went too well for Poe, but the guy deserves a chance, eh? If this was one of Azalea’s stories, something must now go seriously wrong for him …

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Genuinely Happy for Frank, the way you described his curse makes me think his life must be difficult, to say the least. I do hope this turns out at least semi-well for him, but all magic has its price.

My writing has been disrupted by my work. I’m probably not going to be posting the next chapter for a few weeks.

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Hey, real life ALWAYS comes first! Take your time to settle your own needs first, and only come back if you feel comfortable. Reality matters!

I got very close to finishing another chapter today; but then my work reminded me that it is the priority. To meet another surprise deadline, I worked till midnight, and I will get up early tomorrow and continue.

I promise I have not stopped thinking about this fan fiction.

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Chapter 33: Compromise

Marie

Month 12, Day 15, 6:00 AM

Marie worried a little bit about Poe. Not because he appeared depressed. ‘It’s not that Poe seemed sad before,’ Marie thought, ‘but he’s weirdly happy.’

It disturbed her. He woke before she did in the mornings!

This meant, in the past two days, he’d taken her out to eat for three meals each day, they’d visited the park in the upper city, he’d begun to teach her how to draw a dozen new glyphs and he’d helped her memorize them. She’d felt better, so he’d allowed her to perform the spark shooting array and the raven imitating spell. Also, he supervised her practice till she felt tired.

He also gave her an overview of what he called “the basics”, although they seemed far from basic.

He’d explained how sorcerers obtained beast cores, and shown her a spell array the collected kinetic energy, although he didn’t allow her to practice it. He also showed her ways to draw accurate spell arrays when she didn’t have tools available, particularly after her experience in the basement made her worry that magic would remain beyond her reach if she didn’t have a surface to work with.

He’d started explaining potion-making to Marie, and he demonstrated his particular spell array for making magically active kinninnck.

He even showed her how to make portable spell arrays on paper and ink, glass and grease pencil, a marking knife and wood, and slate and soft chalk. He showed her four techniques to steady her hand to make perfect circles as well as mechanical and non-mechanical means to divide circles and mark polygons.

He taught her two different unicursal hexagrams, and third method made of two triangles, although he did not explain how their usage might differ in casting, or if they had any differing uses at all. Marie soaked it all up like a sponge. Drawing became one of her favorite activities. He just had her draw different shapes, without even a glyph in mind.

He also had several sessions that frustrated her to no end; he claimed that they were to teach her “how to think.” He’d started by asking her to read a chapter in the primer, then he would pose questions, and Marie would answer. After covering the book’s statements, he’s keep asking questions. Only now, he began refusing to explain if she was right, and he’d keep asking her questions until she exhausted every little bit of information she’d collected as well as any assumptions she’d made and most of the assumptions the author made as well. After she’d learned how little she knew about one subject, he’d just switch to the next one, including sending her to read another chapter.

Marie did not think of herself as violent, but she wanted to hit him very badly.

Still, this did not even begin to compare to the exercise routine. He’d started on gentle but bizarre calisthetics. She would “pull up” at a doorframe 40 times, or “pushing up” against a wall 50 times, or lie on the ground and lifting her knees 60 times. Each exercise was strangely tiring, and yet gentle. Poe called them progressive calisthenics, and he warned her that they would get harder. After, he would have her set her feet and swing a cane in several different stationary positions; there wasn’t much room in his office, but the ceiling was very tall, and they moved the desk.

Exercise hurt, which Marie did not expect. She’d grown up lifting laundry, washing floors, and generally pretty active work. But, perhaps her time behind a desk made her less fit.

She was barely out of bed and dressed when she heard his knock.

“Let’s start the day with the exercise!” He called.

Marie tried not to grown aloud. But in her head she wondered when Poe would go back to the way he was.

Marie met him at the door, and he had her follow him in his couch-filled room, where he had her lay on the floor. He had her start “knee lifts” - which was a misnomer, because it was intended to strengthen her abdominal muscles.

“Why am I doing this? What does physical exercise have to do with Sorcery?” Marie asked.

Poe continued watching her form, and explained.

“As much as it pains me to admit, the University is not there just to teach young crown family members and talented people for the benefit of society. Oh no. They are also preparing sorcerers for the magical defense of Gilbratha on behalf of the Crowns. Especially the commoners. The Defensive Magic course is always among those take by nobility. The Haze war is not so far in the past that the High Crown has forgotten it.”

Poe watched her for a few moments, while Marie did a few more lifts. She was using all her energy to concentrate on the exercise.

“Tap each heel one at a time. No need to rush. Back flat though. … You might never be called up to fight, but if you are, I’d prefer if you survived it, and that means being in good physical condition. The old model for instruction was theoretical, but that doesn’t actually help you in an actual fight — as you may have noticed, knocking down a sorcerer works as well as any spell if need be. My teachers before University taught me how to physically fight. Likewise, the current Defensive Magic professor knows his business, and works his students hard to get them in good condition. We still need to figure out if anything can be done to protect your heart. Ideally, I’d have you run, but your heart defect likely prevents it.”

“Are you going to look at … the, uh, tattoo?” Marie had trouble referring to it. She still felt embarrassed. She hadn’t told Poe about it, and it felt worse than the sorts of ordinary thievery she’d done which Poe knew about. Knowing that she’d learn to pick pockets wasn’t nearly as embarrassing. Maybe, she felt this way because the tattooed spell array could get her killed.

“I may, but it’s not something I studied. The Stags are aware … but I’d rather go to them only as a last resort, even if healer Nidson knew his business. It’s an illegal spell array, which limits who we can consult. We might need to travel to Silva Erde, and I don’t have any connections there. … Don’t stop now. You need to do some more.”

Marie returned to the exercises while she thought about Poe’s concerns. ‘I knew that the spell array was dangerous and illegal.’ Marie thought. ‘Does that mean I won’t be able to attend University?’ This thought made her feel sick; she’d never thought she wanted to attend before, but now … now she knew different. She …

“You can stop now; you’re looking flushed. Take a few breaths.” Poe said, then he explained the next exercise he wanted her to do. Eventually, Poe ran her through several other physical exercises and then he announced that they would be visiting the Hands, Hearts, and Palms.

Marie packed up some clothing in a sack that she hoped the laundry at the massage parlor would clean for her, and put on he nicer dress and her cloak fastened with the her garnet-studded penannular cloak pin. She again wished her boots were ready; the shoes would let in the damp. Poe met her at the door, with his pipe smoldering as they walked.

They crossed over into Morrows territory into the busy streets, but Marie noticed many grim looks. No one seemed cheerful, even though the sun was bright and the sky mostly free of clouds. Marie also noticed Morrows enforcers were out, looking for trouble.

Still, Poe strolled along, apparently oblivious. They made their way to the Hands, Hearts, and Palms, without incident. Dinky greeted them at the door. With some prompting, he was reminded of Poe and Poe went off to discuss his contract.

Marie went to the back, and visited Mama. Mama was up later than normal; apparently Madame relied on her more in the mornings than she once did. They sat and talked, and Mama passed along the latest gossip.

“Morrows been worried about the Stags.” Mama said. “They looking sideways at anyone new in the territory.”

“Are the Stags making trouble?”

“No, not really. They seem to have quit their stalkin’ at least the last few days.”

Jemnie came into the laundry carrying an armful of sheets.

“Jemnie!” Marie exclaimed. “Are you ok after Poe caught you?” Jemnie dropped the sheets into the hot soaking tank.

“Caught me what?” Jemnie asked.

“You know … the other day at the market?”

“I don’t know what your talking about. I haven’t seen you for awhile. Are you doing fine? They say you’re working for a detective over in Stag territory?”

“You met him … I guess you don’t remember. He’s a sorcerer and I’m learning all kinds of interesting things from him.”

“Sorcerer, eh? He’s not … one of those dark sorts, is he?”

“No,” Marie denied, “he’s a good one.” ‘Or, at least I think he’s a good one.’ Marie thought.

“They took me off the street a bit; someone thinks I was spotted at the market show. But, I’ll be back to it soon. You want to come in again?” Jemnie asked. “The money’s been good, and Uncle says I’m the best he’s got right now. When we worked together you always were the best at, you know …”

“I’m doing real work now!”

“Yeah? You think your better than us now?”

“No? It’s just, I’ve got a chance to be better.”

“You ain’t no princess. You’d best remember that.”

“Who you been talking to boy?” Mama asked. “If my daughter wants to become a thamaturgie, thaumatig … wizard, what business is it of yours?”

“Kett says …”

“Kett ain’t no better than he ought to be.” Mama snapped. “He’s a decade too young to be yammering about what it takes to get on top of the heap.”

Marie grinned. Jemnie sulked. “Yeah … but …” He muttered.

“There’s providin’ a service, selling a product, maybe even lifting a bit here an there from them that can afford it. Men like Kett though, they think all it takes to be on top is some muscle. Well, ain’t no one bigger than Lord Morrow on this heap. An’ he’s smart, not just tough.”

“Kett says you gotta take what you want …”

“An’ I say don’t bring too much attention to yourself. Which one of us two has been in the Morrows longer?”

“You.” Jemnie reluctantly agreed.

“That’s right. Keep your head down. Find someone that can protect you like my girl done. Don’t pretend to be tougher than you are.”

“Yes m’am.” His words didn’t match his defiant expression.

Mama glared at the boy.

“You’ll see Jemnie.” Marie said. “Poe just ran off some Stags the other day. He’s powerful. And clever.”

“Alright.” Jemnie said. But he didn’t sound like he believed it.

Marie helped with the laundry for a bit. She usually didn’t help stir the cauldrons of steaming of clothes for cleaning, because it was too tiring, but when she took a turn at the paddle, she felt surprisingly tougher, although her arms felt like they turned to jelly. She really did need the exercise.

Sometime later, Mama headed for bed, and Marie wondered where Poe had gone. He did not come and get her from the laundry. She decided to check the office. When she arrived in the hallway, the door was closed, but there was an argument going on inside that was overwhelming the privacy ward. And it wasn’t just Poe.

“Listen, little man, you can get a kickin’ like the rest of them that defy Lord Morrow. I …”

Marie heard a popping noise followed by a wordless shout, so she stepped sharply aside from the doorway. A heartbeat later, a man smashed through the door headfirst, breaking the door jam, flipping over and falling on his back with shattered and splintered wood flung down the hall before him. The man had the bewildered look of someone who wasn’t sure how he ended up on the ground in pain. He began to fumble against the hallway’s wall to stand, but he didn’t get even halfway up before he grasped a wrist in pain, slid down into a sitting position, and leaned his back against the wall.

He was reaching for something in a pocket when Poe walked through the office door trailing smoke, holding a walnut-sized conduit and a beast core between the his fingers in one hand, and pipe in the other. The koi shimmered on his coat.

“I’ve come here in good faith.” Poe said. Poe’s expression had a flat and cold look. His voice had a rock-like steadiness. “But, I am a Sorcerer. A magician has no chance against me. You, especially. Touch that wand, and I guarantee your broken wrist and bruised ribs will be the worst of your troubles. Nod if you understand.”

The heavy man on the floor stopped moving and seemed to calm. He moved his hand away from his pocket, and nodded. Poe drew smoke from his pipe and blew a perfectly circular smoke ring that hung lazily in the air, keeping its shape and position with an eerie lasting stillness.

“I have no idea why you thought I would allow you to touch me, or by what right you have to demand my sources. The Mariner has offered to teach an apprentice-level sorcerer or witch of Lord Morrow’s choice the techniques of glamour that will suit your organization’s needs. However. Marie will not be doing glamours for the Morrows. I will not be doing glamours for the Morrows. Nod if you understand.”

The thug nodded. Marie recognized him as one of the two when Kett confronted her. Poe regarded him with absolute contempt in his expression.

“For this service, he expects to be paid. A lot.” Frank paused, and took another mouthful of smoke and blew it out in a stream like dragon fire. “Or, you can wait for me to locate an already qualified sorcerer willing to work with you. Nod if you understand.”

The man nodded.

Poe glanced back into the office to the pale-faced Madame.

“You have the written offer, yes?”

She nodded. Poe turned back to the thug on the ground.

“It’s a shame that you will forget this.” Poe said to him. “It’s so hard to send a message that people will remember. If I write it down, it looks like a threat. It’s not. I am merely trying to remind the obstinate of the consequences of crossing me. You people keep trying to intimidate me. This will not work. I have known real fear in my gut; you barely qualify as indigestion.” Poe’s voice faded to the quiet gritty sound of two smooth river stones rubbed together. “I have glimpsed the wheel of fate, worked alongside Grandmasters of magic, and cast more subtle and terrifying magics than you can possibly imagine.”

Frank contemplated his smoke ring for a moment, and then it faded away.

Frank looked to Marie, and smiled slightly. “You are here. Good! Are you ready to go?”

“Um, yes. I just need to get my clothes out of the drying array.” Marie felt whiplash from how Poe went from chilling cold toward the thug, to pleasantly warm toward her.

“Excellent!” Poe lead them away from the office and back to the laundry. “Marie, I hope that my little outburst doesn’t worry you. I apologize for losing my temper. It’s probably best if you do not mention it to Mama Stella.”

“Did you … curse him?”

“Oh no, nothing of that sort. I just broke his wrist with ‘gull snatching the catch’ and used ‘throwing bags into the hold’ to put him through the door. Size isn’t everything, and he wasn’t very well prepared. My pipe also has some little spell arrays in it that let me deal with his sort of threat.”

Marie began to wonder what the consequences might be. Even with the curse, would Poe remain forgettable? Regardless, Marie decided that she wasn’t likely to forget anytime soon.

———

So, I finally got a new chapter done. When I have a few more, I’ll return to posting edited chapters on Royal Road. Azalea’s latest chapters are giving me new insight into what a Master sorcerer can do. Poe’s only half a semester short, so, shouldn’t he be doing more impressive stuff? Maybe?

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What if, hear me out, I wrote another chapter in a single day. So, instead of holding it for a week, I just dropped it here, because I have no patience?

Chapter 34: Time and Memory

Frank Poe

Month 12, Day 15, 9:00 PM

Frank lifted this components box over his head and put it through the roof hatch. He followed it up and removed a wooden framed tool chest with its shoulder straps from his back, then placed it next to the box. He used a disk from his pocket to cast a dim red light, and waited for his eyes to adjust.

He’d sent Marie to bed, but then he had decided, somewhat on a whim, that it was time to do a proper divination on who had sold Ennis Naught’s artifacts. Poe had reexamined the file, and he’d tested his will to see if it retained the stress of dealing with the aberrant, and he felt fine.

For the last few nights, he’d spent time writing and rewriting the kind of array he wanted to use. He’d start with appearance. If the Raven Queen herself had sold the goods, then this might be a dead end, but even if she protected herself from divination, the shopkeeper wouldn’t. Frank would scry the memories left in the wake of the sale.

With luck, he’d see the face of the seller. With some luck, this would reveal someone that Frank could trace back to the Raven Queen or her location. From there, actual legwork could give him the opportunity to see the Raven Queen for himself. Her magic was becoming mythological in the streets. Rumors abounded now that it had been some time since her last public appearance; was she preparing for her next big move?

Canelo seemed no closer to finding her, although Frank would not be sharing his results with her, unless he could see some advantage, which he did not. The University wanted the treasure she’d stolen pretty desperately, but if they were competent, what plan did they have to scry for her?

Frank suspected that the Coppers or the University would resort to the the most powerful divination team they could get their hands on. Frank has some names in mind if he were to pick a group to scry for the Raven Queen, including the prognos Masters he’d known when he studied. If he didn’t act soon, they’d have her in hand before he’d even get a chance.

The stars were out, but the moon had not risen. His divination would draw upon the starlight as a component. Night was for dreams and visions, secrets and hidden thoughts. Easier to hide, perhaps, but also a time for discovery and inspiration.

He grabbed his long bar compass, metal scribe, brush, and pale moon silver and crushed conduit ink. Once he gathered his tools, he began to mark and draw out a massive tetragram. He worked slowly and precisely. Written instructions and runes went into place. He placed Ennis’ possessions as the focus, and selected components for scrying the past, but also items to give him a vision of the person he would be looking for. From the prospective of the shop owner and the objects themselves, he could expect fairly good detail.

The spell would take all the power he could muster; so he switched to the massive heirloom conduit. Just as he sat crosslegged, and began to clear his mind, he heard the sound of the roof hatch opening.

“Master?” Marie called from behind him. “It’s past midnight. Why are you up here in the cold?”

“I am going to scry for the seller.” Frank thought for a moment. “Would you like to see what I see?”

Frank wasn’t looking in her direction, but he could her her excitement in her stride as she crossed to his spot.

“Yes! Please?”

“I offered. I’m not likely to go back on my word now.” Frank replied. He stood and added to the array as Marie looked on. In the starlight, she was a little smudge of midnight black, except her pale, moon-like, face. Her black eyes watched him with the curiosity only the very young still possessed. Frank hoped she could retain that desire to learn everything all at once. Curiosity would serve her well as a sorcerer. Understanding came from seeking, not finding.

“Are you dressed warmly enough?” Frank asked. “We may be sitting for some time as I build power.”

“Yes.” Marie replied.

Frank guided her to a spot next to him so that they could sit closely together, and Frank could share the divination vision with Marie. It might take a bit more will, but Frank felt he could manage it. He placed his ancient stone scrying bowl in the array, and it would allow him and Marie to watch the events of the past.

It had been hours, but Frank felt more alert and awake than he’d felt for days. He began to feed power to the spell from one of his larger beast cores, and shared the vision in the bowl with Marie. Together, they peered into the past.

This spell travelled backward through time, so the vision started from the shopkeeper’s perspective of handling the goods before Frank bought them. The curse seemed to have severed all memory in the objects of Frank or the trip from the shop to August Agency. Frank noted from himself this aspect of the curse; it was more than just memory the curse seemed to remove. The curse seemed to do more than just remove memory; it also removed him from history. He would have to consider how to counter this when he obtained the pearl.

Regardless, he soon had a clear look into the shop as visitors gazed at Ennis’ possessions, little knowing how important that they were. They were moments of haze as Poe tried to move through this quickly, but then he found the moment when the shopkeeper first put his eyes on the monogramed smoking box.

At first, it seemed like the shop keeper did not even look at the seller, which would have set Frank back to the first step, but then the image shifted as the shopkeeper haggled over the items and some men’s clothing.

The seller came into view. Well dressed and tall, beautiful and melancholy, with black eyes and pale blond hair. The eyes struck Frank as reminicient of Marie’s, or … the Raven Queens. Frank stopped the movement of time to carefully examine the image. His clothes and bearing gave him away as a young scion of a crown family or the son of a wealthy merchant. Frank couldn’t imagine a less likely contact with the Raven Queen.

But Marie gasped.

“Master Poe. I … I know him.”

Frank he felt a thrill of shock. Nothing so great to break his concentration on the spell, but he took a moment to make sure the spell stabilized before he spoke.

“How?”

“Well, um. I think I saw him at the University!”

Frank dropped the spell. He fixed the image of the young man clearly in his mind; that would be necessary for the next step of the spell.

“You think?” He asked.

“He might not be the same, right, but he walked in front of me when I waited on the bench.”

Frank thought about this for a moment. “Okay. We’ll try the next stage of the spell and see what we can find. Wait till after, and we’ll talk about it.”

Frank now knew what he was looking for, he would follow the flow of time backward to see where the boy obtained Naught’s trinkets.

Frank began the attempt to scry the boy, and Frank felt the spell resist him. Frank began to pour on power, but the blonde refused to appear in the scrying bowl. Instead, the water turned dark, almost black. Frank tried to move backward in time in the history of the trinkets, but there was nothing to see. Not where they had been taken from, or anything that might have revealed where they had travelled.

Frank tried to use the tenuous connection with the objects to follow the young man out of the shop. The instant, however, that the spell would shift him, the spell array would drain power and begin to glow, siphoning off into the null. Nothing.

Frank tried several different concepts; the boy’s memories caused the array to become dangerously hot and bright, the touch of his hands on the swag couldn’t seem to connect to an anchor, anyone else that may have touched the material, which just showed Ennis pawing through the pack while the shape of a dark haired young girl blurred in the background. Frank couldn’t even tell how long ago that had been. Frank concluded that had the seller’s appearance, but nothing else. He let the array go.

He turned to Marie.

“He is more slippery than an eel. His anti-divination wards seem formidable, especially if they even fight off time and memory magic. I have to link to him, but it’s not a powerful enough; he remains undetectable. Are you sure you saw him before? What can you tell me about him?” Frank asked.

“While I waited for you to send a message, I saw some students. One of them was a Westbay.”

“Westbay?” Frank’s eyes widened involuntarily. “This man is a Westbay?”

“No. This one was with Westbay. I think. A blonde boy who teased him.”

“Did you catch his name?”

“Maybe, I don’t know. Siler? Sliver?”

“One moment, I’m going to rework the array, and we’ll examine your memory.”

Frank stood up, rubbing the stiffness from his legs, and he busied himself changing the array and changing the components. He had a variety of components for memory already; after all, he had the recipe for a memory potion that would, at least temporarily, allow people to remember him: an ancient black silhouette of an forgotten lady, an empty cameo locket, delicate piece of storm elephant ivory, and other items that Frank swapped with the current time components he’d originally selected.

Frank sat Marie inside the circle, and he sat just on the outside, but in another circle, and he had her look him in they eyes.

“Marie. I will scry your memories. This is a safe spell, but you must trust me. Do you?”

“Yes.”

“Good. It’s possible that if you were in the correct frame of mind, you would remeber this anyway. So, first we’ll get you in the right mental state. I need to you to listen to my voice. Relax your body. Feel just your breath. Breath in.” Frank paused to watch Marie’s chest swell slightly. “Breath out.” Marie’s breath steamed. It had been colder lately. Frank continued to speak in murmuring tones, emphasizing that Marie focus on the sensations of breathing and relaxing. When he could see her relaxing, he moved on to the next step.

“This is a memory spell. You will share a memory with me, but first, I need you to focus on the memory. The sights of that day. The sounds. Are you focused on that moment?”

“Yes … I think I remember the name …”

“No need to rush. We will connect though our eyes. Eyes are the windows of the mind. You will look through mine, and I will look through yours.”

Marie had closed her eyes during the breathing, but she opened her eyes and stared directly into Frank’s own. “Will I see your memories?”

“No. We will just share your memory together.” Frank activated the spell array. It was precise and channeled his desire perfectly. After a moment of disorientation, it was as he remembered the day, walking the path with her. Her memory was crisp and clear.

“Now,” Frank said. “Let your memory travel through this moment. You sat on the bench?”

“Yes.” Marie replied. And Frank saw, from her point of view, her sit. The memory was sharp and clear; better than Frank’s scrying of the shop.

“Now, go slowly and try to recall the sequence of events.”

The memory began to scroll forward, and Frank realized her recall was nearly perfect. It would be easy to fill in the incorrect details; memories had that sort of tendency, but Marie’s mind kept careful track of everything she’d seen. He realized that she might even have a eidetic memory. This spell would enhance recall, but it relied on the person to have a good quality memory to start.

Marie’s attention turned to a group of students. To Frank they were mostly ordinary, but he did see a young man that looked much like the Westbays he knew, and another that seemed like the young Gervin heir. Rarified company indeed. And among them was the same man that had sold Ennis Naught’s trinkets.

Even better, Marie could recall the exact words of their conversation.

‘Silverling, will you be passing on pointers to us in Burberry’s class?’ The Westbay asked.

‘Westbay,’ Sebastien Silverling replied, ‘if you’re inadequately attentive on your own, you can hardly expect me to make up the difference for you.”

Frank watched a bit more as the trio walked out of sight. He let the spell go. Marie swayed a bit.

“Shhh. Relax a moment. Let your body come back to the present.” Frank watched Marie carefully. She closed her eyes, but Marie smiled.

“Silvering! That’s his name.”

“Sebastien Silvering, in fact.” Frank said, unable to keep the shock from his voice. “Thaddeus Lacer’s apprentice.”

“How do you know him?”

“Lacer told me weeks ago, when he stopped by and asked me to find a way to meet the Raven Queen.”

“You think that Silverling is in contact with Raven Queen?”

“I don’t know.” Frank replied. “But now that I know who to look for … Scrying isn’t the only way to find a person. People have habits. Especially University students. They can’t help it; it’s just a matter of finding him when he is away from the University and following him. Especially easy for him, because those student tokens are designed to be tracked. It doesn’t matter how good Silverling’s anti-divination is.”

—————-

Guess what: this matches up with another scrying attempt on Sebastien in the middle of the night. But, she notes:

In the middle of the night, as if they were trying to catch her off guard, the coppers scried for her again. The prickling of cold needles in her back woke her as her ward went to work before she was even conscious.

She had barely finished anchoring the map and was only a couple of seconds into the reverse-scry when the five disks embedded in her back calmed, the pressure easing. Rather than sigh in relief, Sebastien slumped forward, letting out a low groan of defeat. ‘Did they sense what I was doing? Is that why they stopped? But it was so soon! The mercury had barely even started to tremble!’

I says it was Frank, not the Coppers. And he quit because Frank knows when he’s beat.

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This is kinda off topic, but … this is real. Super duper real. Trust me. Redirecting...

Oh snap, things are really heating up. The Sebastian-Siobhan connections are getting stronger. Who knows what they might find?

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I’m working on the next chapter … Wow this is going to be tricky! This book should not end where I originally intended. Except that it has to. IT HAS TO. :grimacing:

The words happened again. I may no longer control them.

Chapter 35: Sheltering

Marie

Month 12, Day 17, 9:00 AM

Sitting at her table in the office, Marie took a bite of her breakfast porridge. Poe left early to watch the University. He needed to scan Silverling’s token, so that he could trace the man as he travelled around the city. But, getting access to Silverling was more difficult than Poe had expected. He did not want either Silverling or Professor Lacer to know that he had decided to spy, so he would go early to campus and try to watch for Silverling by the ornamental gardens near the lifts. He assured Marie that eventually Silvering would leave the university to either meet the Raven Queen, or whoever had him fence the trinkets.

“Could he have just stolen the trinkets himself?” Marie had asked.

Poe thought about this for a while.

“This is a good question.” Poe eventually replied. Marie noticed that he did not actually answer it.

So, Marie sat at the desk, muscles slightly aching from the progressive calisthenics Poe made her do every morning, eating a rich oat porridge—with caramel ham-hock in— and reading the primer. Poe had moved her to the geometry chapters, and she found the ideas there fascinating. The radius of all circles had the proportion to it’s circumference? No matter how big or small? Marie have gone through the physical proof several times because it fascinated her. As she reviewed the construction of triangles, the alarms sounded.

Marie shivered uncontrollably in fear. ‘An aberrant?’ The alarm did not sound close, but she jumped up and locked the office, bringing her book with her, as she left for the shelter. Shelters this close to the Mires were not spacious, and the press of people would be horrible, but Marie would take no chances. She’d already encountered one aberrant, and that was plenty.

Even as she walked as fast as she could, her chest aching, she tried to get her emotions under control. She took a long slow breath, just as Poe has been teaching her, to help her center he will. What would Poe say if he thought she was behaving fearfully? Going to a shelter was the prudent and reasonable precaution anyone would take. No one would blame her if she rushed a little.

The young girl that Marie suspected was the Stag—who had the office under now constant surveillance—stepped away from the corner and followed her. But, soon Marie was among the crowd going into the underground shelter that was marked as warded.

She maneuvered through the crowd, but she couldn’t find a comfortable corner to sulk in. Instead, she ended up sitting between two families and attempting to look unobtrusive. Eventually, however, the Stag teen found her. Marie laughed a little at her effort to conceal himself. She was facing away from Marie at an angle, but kept her eyes swiveled hard to the side, watching her.

From her blind side, Jemnie bumped into her.

“Careful there! Why’re you standin’ in the middle floor like that?” Marie rolled her eyes at Jemnie, who gave her a wink. He’d pickpocketed something off the Stag teen, she was sure, although she hadn’t seen it.

“Oh, is this a friend of yours then?” Jemnie called to Marie.

Marie half covered her eyes with a hand.

“Not exactly.” She answered.

“Oh, then a secret admirer.”

“Hey!” The girl protested.

“Well, who are you then?”

“Cory.”

“Cory! Well then, per’aps you should clear off and leave my friend Marie alone.”

Marie didn’t like where this was going.

“It’s ok Jemnie.” Marie said. She had an idea. “Come on over here Cory, where you can keep an eye on me properly.”

“Hey, I don’t …” Cory started, but Jemnie smirked at her, and she stopped talking and just allowed Jemnie to guide her over to Marie. Up close, Marie saw Cory was shorter than she thought, but she still had some height on Marie.

“So? You work for the Stags then?” Marie whispered to Cory. Jemnie’s eyes narrowed.

“It’s nothin’ person’l. They just asked me to keep an eye out for … trouble.”

“Morrows you mean?” Jemnie asked.

“I mean, you aren’t a Morrow are you?” Cory looked Jemnie up and down. Jemnie wasn’t wearing colors, so the girl didn’t realize.

“What’s it to ya?” Jemnie replied, a hint of menace in his voice.

“Now now!” Marie said. “We’re in shelter and there’s no fighting in shelter.” She looked over to the watcher by the door. “If there’s an aberrant out there, I don’t want to get kicked out to face it.”

“Alright.” Jemnie said. Cory also nodded.

They stood in silence for a while, and eventually they sat on the floor. The people in the shelter mostly tended to be quiet, although there was a constant murmur of hushed voices. Marie pulled out her little journal and began to look over it and tried to write out some notes on the math in her primed.

“What you writing?” Jemnie asked.

“Just notes on geometry. I’ve been studying shapes.”

“Is that thaumaturgy?” Cory asked. “I was tol’ that Mr. Poe was a sorcerer. Is that true? I never saw him.”

Jemnie looked irritated.

“First, he is a sorcerer.” Marie replied. “And second, you did see him, this morning in fact, and the other week when you followed us around.”

“I never done.” Cory said. She turned to Jemnie, “Have you seen him …?”

“I don’t think so …” Jemnie admitted.

Marie sighed and returned to taking notes. They were so thick.

“So, anyway, is that sorcery?”

“No, I’m just learning how to draw different shapes.” Marie replied. Poe promised this would make her sorcery better. According to him, drawing was the gateway to imagination.

But, the two spies seemed to find her notes and drawings fascinating. ‘They must be bored.’ She thought.

Eventually the all clear sounded. She stood up and made her way to the Agency. The weather had remained cold, and Marie wished, again, that The Boots were done. She also thought about how it must be to sit on the corner watching the August Agency.

They didn’t say why the alarms had been set off, but it the Red Guard must have cleared it up very quickly, because they were in the shelter hardly any time at all. Marie still felt a little anxious, and she realized she didn’t want to be in the office alone.

Walking home, the two annoying spies trailed behind, a little hostile to each other, and getting into little shoving matches, until Marie finally had to lay down the law.

“That’s it! Stop acting like horses’ ass. You can follow me about, if you must, but the August Agency is neutral.” Marie decided desperate measures were called for. “Stop being dumb and come inside for a tea.”

“Hot tea?” Cory asked suspiciously.

“Of course, hot tea.” Marie snapped.

“With her?” Jemnie asked.

“Yes. We’re going to have a nice tea, and relax, and be glad that an aberrant didn’t kill us all and sup on our bones.” Marie replied icily. The two paled.

She led them inside and left them in the outer hallway, where she figured they couldn’t get into to much trouble, because the office’s door was still locked. After making tea in her rooms, she came down the stairs carrying a tray with pot of hot tea and cups, to find to the two them looking murderously at each other.

“Come on then.” Marie said cheerfully. “We’ll have some tea, and everyone will feel a little better.” She led them into the office. She had overseen the purchase of a couple of additional chairs for the waiting area in the last few days, so she dragged them to her table, and set the spies down across from her.

They sipped tea warily for a few moments. Marie put her cup down, and glared at them.

“Jemnie, I think it’s time you returned what you stole.”

He thrust out his chin.

“What?” Cory sputtered mid sip.

Jemnie sighed, reached in a pocket, and put a small battered folding knife on the table.

“Hey, that’s mine!” Cory grabbed it.

“I know.” Marie said. “That’s why I wanted Jemnie to give it back. You two are enough trouble as it is.”

“But …” Cory started.

“Neutral. Remember? Not that either of you are particularly good at it.” They glared at her across the table. Marie continued.

“I already know that the Stags are watching because they are worried the Master Poe is a spy or a plant for the Morrows.” Marie nodded toward Cory. “But, Jemnie, what I can’t figure out is why you’d be all the way over here, when you should be doing marks in the Market. So, are the Morrows watching me?”

“I’m not supposed to tell.” Jemnie looked away and mumbled.

“So, yes. Is it Kett?”

“He … yeah.”

Marie wondered how they’d gotten into this mess. “Why?”

Jemnie gave Cory a sideways look. “He says that he wants to meet the Mariner fellow Mr. Poe told Madame about. Maybe he can be bribed into helping us.”

“Does Mama know you’re spying?”

Jemnie shrugged.

Marie considered just denying ever hearing about a Mariner, because she hadn’t heard them name or met them. But, she decided instead to remain quiet. Hardly anything ever got worse for keeping your mouth shut, and mentioning her ignorance wouldn’t help.

She took another sip, and then the door burst open as Poe strode in in a whirl of color, his long coat fastened up to his neck.

“Marie! and guests. As soon as I got the all clear, I decided to get back here.” Poe’s expression seemed worried. “Nothing has gone … wrong, while I was out? You sheltered well?”

“Yes, Master Poe.”

“Are these clients?” Poe asked. Marie smiled at his optimism. But, she suspected he knew they were not.

“No. Sadly. You recall Jemnie, and this is Cory.” Marie gestured.

“Ah, of course, our spies from the Morrows and the Stags. Better get back out there Cory, your partner followed me all the way back from the walls.” Poe grinned. “I don’t think you have a buddy following me today, do you Jemnie? Still, you wouldn’t want to miss us, would you? If you wait at the corner, I’ll be sure to wave as Marie and I walk past.”

The two spies looked awkwardly at Poe. ‘Embarrassed,’ Marie thought.

“But, you should also know Marie and I are headed out, immediately. Business, you understand. No point in watching an empty office!”

Poe ushered them from the office, although Marie noticed that Cory did seem to have drunk the entire cup of tea.

“Now. Get your warm things on, we’re walking to Waterside Market to pick up your boots!”

“The Boots?!” Marie hopped up. They were ready? “When did you find out they were ready?”

“I met the messenger at the door.”

Marie grinned. She’d finally have The Boots. She’d been looking forward to it for forever.

Less than an hour later she was lacing up The Boots in front of an attentive assistant at the cordwainer’s shop. The lady assistant helped adjust the fit so that The Boots fit just as perfectly as Marie imagined. When she stood in them, it felt like her feet were on a cushion of air. She took a few steps.

“Oh! They are so quiet!”

“Yes. These soles are quieter than hobnailed leather or wood. But, not only are they quiet, these will outlast anything you might find form other shops. Take some time to get used to them.” The attendant explained.

Marie walked around a bit in the shop, while the attendant and Poe looked on.

“Poe!” Marie whirled toward him. “Thank you so much! These are amazing.”

Poe smiled, almost like he was genuinely happy.

After the shop supplied Marie with a tin of alchemical waterproofing, and provided an approved list of cobblers to service The Boots on a printed card, Poe and Marie left the shop and head toward a place for lunch.

The spies picked them up from down the block. Cory, Jemnie, and another boy. Poe pulled out his pipe and lit the bowl. Marie thought the smoke smelled a little of flowers.

“Take my hand a moment.” Poe offered.

Marie looked at his hand skeptically. She suspected Poe planned some magic. She noticed he had a conduit tucked into the hand the held the pipe.

“Don’t worry.” He said.

Marie took his hand.

As they came upon an alley between two buildings, smoke billowed from the pipe making a cloud of whiteness. Poe used the smoke to have them step into the alley. But, as they went, Marie noticed that two figures, which looked very much like her and Poe kept moving down the street. Poe motioned for them to press themselves against the alley wall.

Shortly thereafter, the trailing spies hurried past the entrance to the alley. As soon as all three had moved up the street, Poe pulled them from the alley and waved down a cab. Marie giggled to herself. She would have loved to see the expression on Cory’s face.

Once settled in the cab, Poe relaxed and put the pipe away.

“Won’t they notice?”

“That we’ve disappeared in a puff of smoke? Of course. But, I doubt they’ll figure out where they even lost us.” Poe laughed. “I love a bit of illusion magic. I’ll never regret working so hard to make this pipe. About now, my curse probably even confusing them even more.”

“Maybe we shouldn’t be teasing them so much. Jemnie is following us because Kett wants to find someone called the Mariner?”

“Does he?” Poe smirked. “He’ll be disappointed.”

Marie wondered who the Mariner was, but she was certain he wasn’t a client, otherwise she would have been involved … unless it was something to do with the black market sorcerers.

“So,” Poe said as they travelled toward what Marie hoped would be lunch, “How did you cope with the alarms?”

“Fine.” Marie said.

“Really?” Frank replied. “For my part, I had a few minutes of dizziness and anxiety, and it took some time to get control over myself. ”

“Oh.” Marie thought for a few moments. How did she feel about it? Despite the bright day, she felt the dark basement right there with her again. The helplessness. Her fear.

“Marie. You’re crying. Take this handkerchief.”

“Sorry.” She said. She slowly got control over her emotions. “I didn’t realize it was that bad.”

“Even though getting the boots seemed to cheer you up, you have been feeling erratic; you might not realize this, but you are expressing your will outside the boundaries of your body. You need to pull it in. I tend to be sensitive to this sort of disturbance. We’ll eat, and I’ll teach you some exercises to help you calm yourself. Also, a little anxiety potion, perhaps. I know a good apothecary we can visit.”

Marie nodded. The tears eventually stopped, and they rode for a few more minutes until thr cab stopped at a restaurant close to the wall.

“Went I was a student, we used to sneak out to this place when we could. You are supposed to eat all your meals on campus. But, sometimes when the bad food gets to be too much, wealthier kids will come here for ‘books’.”

Marie didn’t quite get it until she saw the combined cafe and book store built from the white stone cliffs with decorative columns and large shop windows, called “Roget’s University Bookshop”. Aside from being two full stories of books shelved from floor to ceiling, the attached cafe had a dozen white stone tables inside with chairs that seemed more decorative than comfortable.

Poe suggested some food and and drink, and they sat at a table and watch students arrive and purchase food, and even the occasional book.

“Books are, despite recent innovations, still expensive. The students rarely need to buy them, because they have access to the University, but there are plenty of fictional novels and the like.”

“Like, just a book with made-up stories?”

“Of course.”

“Why would you buy that?”

Poe seemed taken aback by this question. “No, I don’t suppose someone like you would. Let’s just say some people enjoy it.”

They ate in silence while Marie contemplated the idea that people would write down made up stories and then sell them in books. ‘Telling an entertaining story now and again made some sense, but why go to all the effort to print it?’ Marie thought. ‘Maybe people didn’t know any good story tellers?’ She looked around the book filled shop. ‘Must money in it.’

After, although it was past noon, they hung around park near the lifts watching for Silverling.

“What if he passed by when we were eating?” Marie wondered.

“There’s no hurry.” Poe replied. “Silverling isn’t trying to escape our notice. He”s probably not looking in shop windows, doubling back on his path, and what not to try to find a tail. Besides, I don’t need to tail him. I just need to see him.” Poe tapped his glasses. “The spell array I installed here will let me know the code on his token. With the token code, I can’t exactly watch him move about the city, but I can put up sensors that will let me know roughly where he is. Triangulation will do the rest. We can see who he visits. It should be very helpful to put together the connections. This will be good experience for you, I’ll show you how enchanting works!”

“What do you mean triangulation?”

“Oh, you’ll like this. Do you have paper?”

Poe borrowed Marie’s grimoire/notebook, and drew a coarse map of the city, then a series of dots over the page. The he explained to her how someone moving among the dots would ping these artifacts. Knowing which ones received the signal, and a minimum of three, Poe would be able to find Sebastien wherever he might go.

“There’s lots of ways this could be interfered with, of course. The simplest would be if Sebastian hides his token, misplaces it, or if he gives it to someone else. BUT, even if he does give it to someone else, that will give us a connection to examine.” Poe explained.

Poe also showed Marie some of the tiny spell arrays in his pipe and how he would draw upon them.

“Could you make other artifacts with portable spell arrays?”

“I suppose. But, without many years and a large amount of will, spell arrays require more precise instructions for most sorcerers. You, for instance, are many years from casting the illusion spell I did with the smoke.”

Marie wondered what she’d be like when she was that sort of sorcerer. They kept chatting and waiting for Silvering to appear. He did not.

Finally, after the sun set, they hurried to the apothecary to get the potions that Poe mentioned. He had in mind a mild anti-anxiety potion that should help them both; relieving the stress and tension without being addictive. And, he was low on healing potion. He explained he could make his own, but he preferred a professionally made potion instead.

Marie found the almost scentless potion shop an extremely different sort of place than the Verdant Stag’s little room of potions and salves. The bottles had elegant printed labels, and the shelves made of close grained light wood. The staff wore clean white clothes, with white aprons that did not show a speck of dust or dirt. The floor shone that Marie almost didn’t want to tread on it. Even in her nicest dress, and The Boots, she felt a little shabby.

Poe, of course, took no special notice of these things. He simply walked to the counter and ordered several potions by name. As the attendant was wrapping his purchases, another customer entered the shop.

Marie turned and gasped. She grabbed Poe’s sleeve and tugged at it. Poe looked down at her, and then to where her eyes had settled on the young blond man who entered.

Sebastien Silverling.

If Silverling’s coincidental arrival surprised him, Poe did not show it in the slightest.

“One more moment my dear, and then we’ll go.” Poe murmured. He finished paying and took a wrapped parcel away from the counter.

Poe picked up the package and put it in Maries arms. If Silverling noticed her, or Poe, he showed no sign. In fact he seemed like he was on a mission for something specific. Marie didn’t know what strange potion he asked for, but Marie saw a glitter in Poe’s hand and he briefly touched his hand to the circular lenses of his glasses. There was a brief glow.

Poe guided Marie from the store, although she wanted to observe the boy more. There was something attractive about him. Striking. She wasn’t sure what it was.

As the walked away, Poe dropped his conduit back into a pocket.

“Got it!” He whispered.

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For those of you keeping count, although I’m sure you aren’t, I’ve passed 100,000 words written while working on this fiction. Those words aren’t all printed here. So, how would you know anyway? Have you been doing divinations? Are you consulting an Oracle Raven?

Anyway, that feels like a lot. Is it a lot? I expected this to be over by now. So, I’m going to say it’s a lot.

The plan was to set Poe and Marie up for a nice little investigation into the Raven Queen, maybe see some amazing stuff (especially Moonsable), touch on some rumors … generally have a good time.

Where’d Cory and Jemnie come from? Why Am I Sketching A Whole New Arc?

Dang it.

There are 35 chapters. At this rate, there’s between 12-15 more chapters to go and another uh 65 ish days of writing … that can’t be right. My little fan fic story can’t be going over a book and a half worth of words, can it?

Anyway, I promise this story will end at the right spot! You’ll find out if Poe and Marie manage to find out the truth. Eventually. :sweat_smile:

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Poe and Marie are getting close to some dangerous secrets. I am intrigued

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:smiley: Yes. That’s the idea. Glad you are having good time.

Chapter 37: The Rain is Going to Come

Frank Poe
Month 12, Day 18, 2:00 PM

Frank had spent his morning enchanting little round coins that would pass divination rays back to a spelled street amp he kept his office, then distributing them at some of the places he expected Silverling might frequent. He’d placed the first batch in the morning, and it was afternoon when he finally returned.

On return, Marie did not seem to miss Frank; she studied and read at her table without complaint. From time to time, he noticed she’d bounce the toe of her new boots on the table leg and grin. They were very quiet, and apparently quite “bouncy.” Marie had gushed about them on the walk back to Agency yesterday.

Even that morning, the spies still spied, of course, but Poe didn’t even have to resort to diversionary magic when Marie wasn’t with him. If they broke visual contact with him, the spies pretty much forgot that they were following him. The streets of Gilbratha were plenty convoluted enough to manage it.

Annoyingly, however, the Stag spy seemed to have figured out that she should take notes. He’d caught glimpses her notebooks as she followed him. It wouldn’t be long before the Morrow spies did the same, although Jemnie didn’t seem to be literate. He was never alone. Usually he had a rail thin partner, whether male or female, Poe hadn’t discovered yet. That one usually followed Poe, while he supposed Jemnie was set to follow Marie.

People would remember Poe, he knew that much. So the spies always managed to return to the August Agency to keep watch. Poe decided he’d need to do something about that, but not today. Today he was going to test his new monitoring system. He just had a few coins placed; both spelled with unnoticeability charms and the specialty divination detector for Silverling’s token.

Frank waved at Marie, walked into his office, and sat at his desk where the scry map was waiting for him. This would just be a test, so he set the components and expected a null result. He’d just seen Silverling in the city; there was no reason for him to return. Except, it seemed that he did, because Silverling immediately pinged on the little enchanted coins he’d placed near the market. It could be a malfunction, but Frank was confident it was not.

Frank jumped up from his desk and returned to Marie on the other side of the partition, and let her know he was going back out. Partly to avoid the spies, Frank called a cab. When he arrived, it took him some time to locate Silverling.

And when he found him, Frank was surprised to see the well-dressed man attempting to sell a small cerelium conduit. Frank did not want to be too noticeable; an apprentice of Lacer’s might very well have the clarity of will to recall Frank. But, even as Frank sulked in doorways and tried to stay in Silverling’s blind spot, Silverling was entirely to distracted by the low prices the shops were willing to offer. Frank did take a risk to get a good look at the chunk of cerelium. From time to time cerelium was marked, but this one was plain. It would have been a mere 25 gold when Frank last looked for a piece of it, so the prices offered, some over 50 gold, seemed high to him. Silverling, however, rejected them as too low. Frank wondered how much money did Silverling expect to get? Why was he driving such a hard bargain?

After trying a few shops, Silverling finally stomped onto the pavement. Head down in contemplation, Silverling trudged back toward the University lifts. Frank followed.

Not far from the market, Silverling suddenly stopped. He seemed to have spotted something, although Frank couldn’t tell at first what the man had seen. Silverling walked over to a downspout. Frank stopped not far away, carefully removing an artifact from his coat, he held a seashell up to an ear, and listened.

“This is a bad place to make a nest,” he said. “The rain is going to come and wash you all away.”

Frank puzzled at that for a moment, and then realized Silverling was talking to a tiny nest of Sprites at the downspout. Frank watched, fascinated, as the young thaumaturge proceeded to attempt to rescue the sprites from their poor choices. But, the adult didn’t seem to want to be moved. Frank smiled a bit.

But then, Silverling did something that Frank did not expect. He expressed his will in a soothing wave. Like a druid, or animist.

“I don’t want to hurt you,” he whispered. Frank’s artifact barely caught the sound. “You are not safe. I want to take you to a new nest. It will be warm and dry there. You can trust me.” And Frank felt it; even across the street, Silvering’s words held genuine sincerity.

‘What sort of thaumaturge is he?’ Frank thought. ‘No one teaches the old ways. Not to a first term student, anyway.’ Frank used some animism at the August Agency. It helped him communicate with Frigg, and even kept him aware of the other animals that lived, even in the city, near the office. But, Silverling’s control impressed Frank. ‘Lacer isn’t training him to do this too, is he?’

This man may be young, but Frank Poe wondered what he would be like in a year. Frank had once felt competent, in contrast, this boy had Talent. Frank had long ago given up on jealousy. He hated incompetence, even in himself. Sometimes though, he would still come across amazing .

Silverling managed to coax the sprite into a scarf covered hand, and feed it honey. He gathered up the nest and headed toward the University. The sprite ate honey the entire way back to the University. Frank noted that not only did Silverling know to use his will to calm the creature, but he knew the proper way to care for one when relocating a nest.

Frank found that it wasn’t particularly difficult to followed the distracted young man. After all, the sprite had him throughly distracted. Frank could practically walk behind the man, and he did not notice at all.

‘What do you plan to do with the sprite, I wonder?’ Frank thought. ‘There are some very useful spell components in a sprite. Or, if he was so greedy on the value of that little chunk of cerelium, does he plan to sell the nesting sprites?’

Silverling made his way to the top of the cliffs and the University, nursing the little Sprites the whole way. The tiny mother seemed to very greatly enjoy the honey Silverling fed her.

Frank had to negotiate a visitor’s pass, but he managed to catch up with Silverling by a tree not far away. Frank leaned against a tree at a distance, and watched, to his surprise, that Silverling was digging out a space at the base of tree for the sprites to have a new nest.

Several girls had noticed Frank watching, and they joined him in curiously watching Silverling’s behavior as well. Frank had to keep his listening artifact discreet, so he put it away. They whispered to each other, and Frank tuned them out. But one girl’s curiosity finally reached the point she decided asking a stranger was preferable to ignorance.

“What is he doing? Do you know?” She asked Frank.

“Relocating a sprite nest.” Frank replied.

“Oh! They are very pretty, aren’t they? Its so kind of him!” The girl said to her friend.

When Silverling was done, he whispered something that Frank didn’t catch, and Frank observed him head toward the dormitories. Frank reckoned Silverling was unlikely to lead him to the Raven Queen, and he let the young man go.

“Let’s go see the nest!” The girl said to her friend, and the headed over. Frank trailed behind. Uncertain what he expected, Frank saw Silverling had protected the nest from wind and rain, and had added a component that would warm it.

‘This cost him money.’ Frank wondered. ‘What sort of person does this?’ And Frank felt a strange anxiety. ‘This is someone associated with the Raven Queen?’

Frank expected cruelty or ambition, but the man gave up real income and even magical components to help a sprite live, even though he’d just wandered through shops trying to sell a cerelium conduit for the most gold possible.

Frank had to admire Silverling, a little bit. Even when he obviously did not care if others saw, Silverling would help even what most thaumaturges thought was no more than an interesting bug.

Frank observed the girls cooing over the little sprite larva, and he smiled. He vowed he would keep an open mind with Silverling. The young sorcerer had that unusual qualities few ambitious thaumaturges had: empathy.

Silverling had not lead Frank to the Raven Queen, but Frank reckoned this would always have been the most time consuming way to find Siobhan Naught. Silverling was the best connection he had outside the Stags, so Frank would continue following him.

But, as he watched the little sprite feed her babies, Frank realized that he hoped the Raven Queen had not used Silverling after all. Silverling did not deserve it.

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Thank you for sharing this wonderful story. I would certainly pay for books about your characters! Please know that many of us will appreciate your words.

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Thank you for your kind encouragement.

I would certainly pay for books about your characters!

Alas, fan fiction makes no money, but Poe and Marie are fun to write.

Frankly, this story would require A Lot More Editing before it could be published, and Azalea would have to license it for-profit publication. I’m pretty sure she has Better Things to do. I’m just glad she likes it well enough to allow me to keep writing it.

I hold out some hope that I will publish other fiction. I have drafted a story in a magic punk sort of universe. I started it in 2016 or so? It has a similar sort of magic system inspired probably by a lot of the same things that inspired Azalea. For that story, the magic component follows the sort of circles and “pentagram” magic of full metal alchemist, the “programming” language of Denno Coil, the paper seals and martial arts magic of Mr Vampire and Journey to the West, a biography of the “Last Samurai” - Saigo Takamori, Western ritual Wizards/Sorcerers, the Golden Bough, FFXIV’s summoner class, and Jack Reacher. And, you know, just soaking up a couple of thousand other books, samurai and marital arts movies and anime.

A lot of this fanfic was meant to be a fun tryout of a style different than I wrote that story, while practicing the sort of character building that I hope to use in any future work.

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I love how often its the small actions Sebastian takes that leave an impact on people. While he always thinks he comes across brutish, people aren’t blind to the acts of kindness he DOES do.

Its a great juxtaposition from the big swings of Siobhan, whose actions are always looked upon with grandosity.

Its a good parallel, the much loved rags to riches apprentice vs the fearsome powerhouse Blood Sorcerer. Good on you for showing that dichotomy!

Thank you! I’ve said more than once that my favorite part of this series is the rumors; but it goes to both personas. She is a fantastic student. Yet, she thinks poorly of herself all the time. It’s like this scene:

And then, to her horror, Damien cleared his throat, loosened the tie at his throat, and drawled in deep tones, “I am a basically average thaumaturge, barely scraping by. Yet somehow, the rest of you make me look impressive with your astounding incompetence.“

Siobhan is always so worried that Professor Lacer is going to dump her, she has no idea. “Barely scraping by” is her default, so it’s easy for her friends to see it in a way she doesn’t.

So, I think she should be just as impressive to Poe as she is to Liza and Lacer, both of whom are quietly impressed.

That scene is one that has always been in the outline for the story; even back when I was first working out what I wanted to cover, it must have been the third thing I wrote about including (the first thing was Poe getting hired to find Siobhan, then Moonsable and Marie). I’ve been aiming at a number of story milestones like this.

A lot of this story seems to have just shown up! Poe has the pipe, Marie has “The Boots” and neither of those things were specifically planned at all.

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